Saturday, 27 April 2013

Homework link

Dear all
For the last couple of weeks we have looked at The Bloody Chamber.

We've looked at quotes and now we'll have to look to analysis.

Watch this video for homework.

Make sure you let me know if you have any problems.
Ms

Friday, 8 March 2013

Final Countdown


Firstly - Happy international Women's Day!

OK - so this is where we are on our plan (the orange sheet)
- Draft of your essay in by Friday 8th  (1200 -1500 words). Email to me to mark over the weekend. Thanks to those who have done this already.

11th March
»       First draft feedback. Working on feedback to redraft in lessons.
»       Using critical material to ensure high quality interpretations
»       If I do not have this draft, I will have to consider whether or not you can be entered for the exam.

18th March
»       Final draft due in Monday’s lesson. 18th March. You must bring an electronic copy to this lesson.
»       Ironing out any last discrepancies. 

Last week of term. There’s a lesson on the Monday. This is the final deadline for any coursework. If coursework is not handed in on this date, I will use your first draft to submit to the board. Absolutely not one single excuse will be accepted

So... Some musings...
One thing I think it is worth stating is that this is your final coursework and you should draw on everything you have learnt across this A Level to do well. 
You need to ensure that you incorporate your learning into your coursework. It should include narrative voice, genre, language analysis, feminism as well as how the context impacts upon reader understanding. A wealth of knowledge!

The narrative voice in novels changed towards the end of the nineteenth century. The essay by Henry James, ‘The Art of Fiction’ signalled a change in the moralistic premise of Victorian novel and a move away from audience sensationalism to art. The challenges to convention reflect the social change at the end of the nineteenth century, and the transgression in the concept of identity, gender and the reality of moral literature. This is further evident in the theatre of the late nineteenth century. For example, Oscar Wilde’s The Importance of Being Earnest (1895) and Henrik Ibsen’s The Doll’s House(1889) question Victorian notions of earnestness, gender and the reality of happy endings.

In Jane Eyre, Brontë also uses romanticism and the Gothic to emphasise the introspectiveness of Jane. In chapter 26 Brontë uses a blend of these genres:
‘Jane Eyre, who had been an ardent, expectant woman- almost a bride, was a cold, solitary girl again: her life was pale; her prospects desolate. A Christmas frost had come at midsummer; a white December storm has whirled over June; ice glazed the ripe apples, drifts crushed the blowing roses’ (Brontë)
The description of landscape to represent feeling and emotion, in this case pathetic fallacy, is typically associated with romantic poets. The iced ‘ripe apples’ connote her ‘ripe’ sexuality and fertility ceasing now her marriage has not happened. The crushed roses are significant as a stock article associated with love. The repetition of ice, particularly the ‘untrodden snow’ connotes the emotional coldness of her solitary journey. These evocative metaphors forefront descriptions the readership would have associated with the Romantic poets Coleridge, Wordsworth and Byron.  The ‘desolate’ and barren imagery are located in the gothic.  Also, by addressing herself in the third person Brontë creates a confusion of identity that shifts from the security found in a first person narrative. Furthermore, she has reverted from woman to child. This indicates a confusion of identity and also suggests the lack of autonomy women have when unmarried and fatherless. Brontë combines genres to not only to create imagery associated with Jane’s emotional state, but also to make a social comment about women.

Although there is a blurring of genres, one of the most pervasive genres in Jane Eyre is the gothic. Brontë skilfully uses gothic techniques so that the readers know we are in Jane’s emotional world. The gothic is evident in the description of landscapes and the imprisonment in the red room at the end of Chapter one. She describes herself as ‘out of herself’ (Chapter 2, pg 6) and the description of the room places the reader in the gothic as Jane tells the reader her story of torment at her incarceration. The mood of the ‘revolted slave’ was still bracing her with ‘bitter vigour’ (Brontë, pg 9) and she has some sort of mental breakdown. The gothic is sustained as she awakes to see a ‘terrible red glare, crossed with thick black bars’ (chapt 3, pg 13).  Brontë uses the gothic again to portray the incarceration of the Creole, Bertha Mason or Antoinette. The images are strong and animalistic:
‘a figure ran backwards and forwards. What it was, whether beast or human being, one could not, at first sight, tell: it grovelled, seemingly on all fours; it snatched growled like some strange, wild animal: but it was covered with clothing, and a quantity of dark, grizzled hair, wild as a mane, hid its head and face. ‘ (Chapter 26, pg 308)
Jane’s meeting is loaded with animalistic imagery and a contrast to the pale and small Jane. The dehumanising of Bertha/Antoinette (I'll say Bertha because that's how Jane would have known her) and Jane’s later references to her as a ‘demon’ and a ‘vampyre’ locate this description in the gothic. The use of the gothic here and in Jane’s ordeal in the red room link Jane and Bertha on a psychological level and signify Jane’s struggle with self-control and rebellion of the ‘revolted slave’ that frequently burns inside her: Bertha is the dark side of Jane. Fin de siècle novels such as The Awakening, Draculaand Heart of Darkness show the fear of the miscegenation and reverse colonialism, but this clearly shows that fear of the racial ‘other’ was evident much earlier in the century and Brontë’s use of the gothic heightens the fear of the dark Bertha, whilst simultaneously highlighting the plight of the social incarceration of women in nineteenth-century society. Unable to justly represent the plight of women because of the social constraints upon her Brontë had to create a double. By the end of the nineteenth-century it is unnecessary for there to be a symbolic doubling as it has been recognised that the ‘mad rebellious woman and the sane dutiful woman were really inhabitants of the same body.’

Jane is significant and vital to our understanding of Antoinette. It was her treatment by Bronte that moved Jean Rys to write her prequel. Why?
You need to ensure your essays are not re-telling the story, but a comment on the how and why the writers' have constructed the story in this way. Why? Why? Why?

Let me know if you have any questions/concerns. 

Best wishes,
Ms

Thursday, 21 February 2013

Symbolic meaning in The Yellow Wallpaper.

Here's today's lesson. Looking at The Yellow Wallpaper for symbolic meaning.
Homework is to write a paragraph answering: How is symbolic meaning created in TYW?


Structure and WSS

Hi Y13

Whoops..! My powerpoint for the holiday homework didn't upload. Sorry. It is now below. Perhaps you might leave a comment in future to say this hasn't happened?
I thought you had it.



Thursday, 31 January 2013

Imagery in Wide Sargasso Sea

Right - below! Find a quote, an example of imagery, in Section One.
Succes Criteria in the presentation.
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Monday, 21 January 2013

The significance of race in Jane Eyre

Hi Y13
In recent lessons we have made red rooms and an attics. These places link Jane and 'Bertha'.
Your homework is to read this and leave a comment. This should answer: How significant is race in Jane Eyre? (due before Thursday's lesson)
The autobiographical premise/first person narrative of the governess, Jane Eyre, allows an ethnocentric viewpoint that varies in its representation of race and, in consequence, significance. The two most obvious representations of race are through Bertha Mason and St John Rivers, but Charlotte Bronte also uses subtle language to connote racial stereotypes. It has been suggested that Charlotte Bronte uses representation of race as a metaphor for class and gender inequality.  It is also important to note the significance of the representation of race on the nineteenth-century novel’s readership, predominately white middle class women, to our own contemporary post-colonial ideas of race and British imperialism.

The racial representations of Bertha Mason are significant as the reader sees her through Jane’s eyes before we hear her story. The images are strong and animalistic.
 ‘a figure ran backwards and forwards. What it was, whether beast or human being, one could not, at first sight, tell: it grovelled, seemingly, on all fours; it snatched growled like some strange, wild animal: but it was covered with clothing, and a quantity of dark, grizzled hair, wild as a mane, his its head and face.’ (Bronte, Chapter? p.308)
Jane’s meeting with Bertha Mason is loaded with animalistic imagery as Bertha Mason ‘gazed wildly’ (Bronte, 309) at Jane and biting of her husband is an animalistic act. Bronte dehumanises Bertha with the description turning her into something ‘wild’ and ‘grizzled’ and then is more sinister with ‘goblin’ and ‘vampire’ (Vol II, C10), clearly signalling the Gothic.   The reader then identifies this as the ‘discoloured’, ‘savage face’ that tears Jane’s veil in Chap. 25.
‘the fearful blackened inflation of the lineaments! … the lips were swelled and dark; the brow furrowed: the black eyebrows widely raised.’ (Bronte, 299)
Bronte’s representations of race here show Bertha Mason as non-white and conform to racist 19th century stereotypes. However, the representation of Bertha Mason’s ethnicity becomes more ambiguous as Rochester reveals their story. She is described as a Creole, which at the time could have meant black or white. As her father was an ‘old acquaintance’ of Rochester’s father and as she is white enough to marry a wealthy English man the reader can assume she is predominately white.  Although ambiguous as a ‘Creole’ Bertha Mason does become blacker as her sanity declines; she is compared by Rochester to Blanche Ingram as ‘tall, dark, and majestic’ when they first met; (Bronte, Chapter 27, pg 321) this contrasts starkly with the animalistic image of Bertha Mason in the attic. The representation of Bertha Mason’s mother ‘the Creole, was both a madwoman and a drunkard’ was also significant to the 19th century audience.
‘(Rochester) associates that line with two of the most common stereotypes associated with blacks in the nineteenth century.’ (Meyer, p. 229)
This is significant as, as cited by Meyer, Bronte had associated these racist stereotypes with black people from childhood and was a commonly held belief at the time. This shows that the representation of Bertha Mason in Jane Eyre fits with nineteenth century beliefs and fears of non-whites and the association of race and low morals as coterminous.

The racial representation of Bertha Mason is compounded by the juxtaposition with Jane Eyre. Jane is often described as pale and small, in contrast to the tall and dark ‘Indian Messalina’ (Bronte, 328), and often described by Rochester as his ‘English girl’. As well as represented racially different from Jane, Bertha is also the emotional opposite to Jane; Jane is composed and modest whereas Bertha is ‘intemperate and unchaste.’(Bronte, 323) The representation of Bertha Mason reinforced the fear of racial difference and of women that didn’t fit the cultural British norm.  The representation of race implies the non-white are insane, sexually provocative and dangerous. The representation of the race of Bertha Mason is significant as a contrast to Jane.  The use of the Gothic, and patterns of imagery in Jane’s ordeal in the red-room, could be said to link Jane and Bertha on a psychological level in terms of struggle against social oppression with Jane’s internal struggles with rebellion and control.

The representation of the savage nature of people in the colonies is validated by the proselytising St John Rivers. St John martyrs himself for his ‘great work’: Christianity. He hopes of joining those who have ‘merged all ambitions in the glorious bettering of their race’ (Bronte, Chapter 32, p?) and, in doing so, the goodness of white people. He throws his ‘valuable life away’
‘Firm, faithful, and devoted, full of energy, and zeal, and truth, he labours for his race; he clears their painful way to improvement; he hews down like a giant the prejudices of creed and caste that encumber it.’ (Bronte, p. 481)
Here St John fits the Victorian work ethics with the Christain need to proselytise the colonies, cutting down the prejudices of creed and caste while simultaneously, and ironically, holding and perpetuating his own. This is significant as nineteenth- century colonisation needed to be justified and this was done using the idea of the inferior ‘savage’ native needing to be civilised into proper British behaviour. To a contemporary ‘modern readership’ is more accurate. Contemporary usually implies ‘of the time’ St John’s ‘energy and zeal’ seems suspicious as it represents the imperialistic brutality against natives of colonized countries. This shows how the significance of representation of race changes historically, a point put forward by Spivak.

The British Empire is significant in reading Jane Eyre. Spivak cites that Bertha Mason is born out of the ideology of imperialist axiomatic. When living in the colony in Jamaica, Rochester’s torment and emotional ‘storm’ is calmed by the reassuring, civilising European wind:
‘A fresh wind from Europe blew over the ocean and rushed through the open casement: the storm broke, streamed thundered, blazed, and the air grew pure. I then framed and fixed a resolution’ … ‘the sweet wind from Europe was still whispering in the refreshed leaves.’ (Bronte, 325)
This shows that the colonies were wild, mad places, but the sanity of Europe can reach Rochester. The use of natural imagery to describe extreme emotion pervades the novel. Conversely, the imperialistic interpretation is seen by Meyer (228) as highlighting Bronte’s anxieties about oppression and is a response to some Victorian texts and the connection of black people and white women to demean both, emphasising the need for control over both by white men. Meyer links Bertha’s blazing rebellion to the slave uprisings in the West Indies, and finds in this an oppression shared by white women and black people. Salvery and anxieties also remain in the unhealthy mist over Ferndean; slavery is used by Jane Eyre to describe her situation throughout Jane Eyre. As a child she describes herself as like ‘any other rebel slave’ and when Rochester buys her gifts she feels like a degraded slave.  Racial representation is significant as slavery and oppression serve as an allegory for women’s dependence on men.

The representation of race having significance for allegorical gender assertions is apparent in chapter 24.
‘I would not exchange this one little English girl for the Grand Turk’s whole seraglio ...”
“I’ll (…) preach liberty to them that are enslaved – your harem inmates amongst the rest. … I’ll stir up a mutiny.’ (Bronte, p. 283)
Here Rochester is emphasising Jane’s subjugation and her response is to wish to emancipate those women; this highlights her own oppression and the dichotomy of her preaching to those who she perceives as oppressed whilst being oppressed herself. This ethnocentric view of herself as, although oppressed, morally better than the women in the Turks seraglio and therefore shows the significance of racial representation and stereotypes.

Charlotte Bronte also subtly connotes racial and nationalistic prejudices. She uses the name Dionysius O’Gall for the family that Jane Eyre would work for in Ireland: Dionysius is the Greek God of wine and insinuates the drunkenness of the Irish. Charlotte Bronte also refers to Celine Varens and Adele as being materialistic and superficial because they are French, but Adele is saved from this by the superior English:
 ‘a sound English education corrected in a great measure her French defects.’ (Bronte, 479)
Charlotte Bronte does not just use race, but a degree of xenophobia to imply the superiority of the English. Where Bertha’s Creole heritage explains her insanity, Celine Varens morals were explained by her French nationalism.

Charlotte Bronte also uses white and black in Jane Eyre that connotes good and bad. The old ‘witch’ is ‘almost as black as a crock.’ (Bronte, 199) and Rochester also has a ‘dark, imperious eye.’ There are also the references to Bertha. This is contrasted by the welcoming ‘whitewashed villa’; the white River’s cottage; the pale Jane Eyre and the Christian ‘Whitcross’ (Whitecross).  The symbolic white of the pure and virginal also accentuate the depravity of the dark racial references.

Race is also used in Jane Eyre with irony to highlight class snobbery and prejudice in British, nineteenth century society. Mrs Dent’s criticism of Jane portrays her as a snob ‘it was a reminder that one of the anathematised race was present …  “I see all the faults of her class”( Bronte,  183) Here, Bronte is using race ironically to satirise class and also gender inequality. Middle-class women were at the mercy of judgements their fathers made and in consequence would end up in the ‘slavery’ of governessing. Women’s reliance on men often left them with no money or inheritance. The image of a lonely middle-class governess suggests promiscuity, madness and a challenge to the domestic stability. This also links to the depiction of Bertha.

Jane Eyre represents race as negative, but it is important to consider nineteenth century ideology and culture that was exceptionally scared of racial differences; imperialism often only reinforced these anxieties. Charlotte Bronte reveals her ethnocentricity in the novel when it is read today, this would have varied significantly to her contemporary audience in a time when imperialism was not seen as a stain on British history as it often is today. Bronte also uses race ironically to highlight snobbery and class prejudice in Victorian England. The representation and significance of race in Jane Eyre help to show some the inequalities that existed in nineteenth century England and some of the struggles to break away from them. 

What do you think? Leave a comment.
Ms

Sunday, 20 January 2013

Tomorrow

Can you bring an electronic version of your essay to tomorrow's lesson please?
Could you also pass this message on to other people in the class?
Thanks,
Ms
PS Hope you're having fun in the snow...

Friday, 18 January 2013

Where we are now. Read this - it's important.



Dear Y13
I feel like we are a disparate group and I am very much looking forward to the end of the exam period, as I am sure you are, so that we can re-group and feel like there's a sense of continuity for us all.
This term so far then...
We have looked at a critical interpretation of A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning. This is an excellent poem to compare are you can easily create an argument about Donne - he writes them both, yet they show a stark contrast in the representation of women.

There are a couple of areas where, as a class, we need focus:

  • analysis of form/ structure
  • comparison 
  • context

As a brief overview, John Donne lived in a turbulent time in British history. Elizabeth I’s reign was long and also created unease over gender roles. Donne’s writing was after her reign, but the shift in roles remained after her death. Elizabeth was able to subvert gender roles to lead convincingly (have a look at the ‘heart and stomach of a King’ speech) and to use her feminine wiles to create a ‘cult of love’. ‘In the centre of this extraordinary cult of love was Elizabeth, who managed to induce her favourites to command and combine the affection of a subject for their sovereign with that of a man for his lover’ (Royal Museums Greenwich. This is an excellent link). Elizabeth created a culture of flattery where ostentatious declarations of love were necessary to gain her favour in the court.
Other societal factors, such as the growth in urbanized environments, also exacerbated this change as women and men moved away from agricultural work to employment in shops and developing industry (though not to the same extent as the industrial revolution). These changes added to fears in society about ideas of femininity and masculinity.
Of course, one way women can be kept in their place, so to speak, is by maintaining a focus on their physicality: objectification. We can see this in the work of Donne’s contemporaries and by Donne himself in THMGTB.
The Petrarchan Sonnet is one of the most enduring poetic structures. Petrarch was a 14th Century poet and his poems had an resounding impact on the structure of poems throughout the following centuries. The work of Spenser, particularly in The Faerie Queen, can also be seen to maintain a focus on the physicality of women through the poetic form and convention: this is where it becomes easy for you to both analyse form and comment on the context - what a gift!
In Valediction: Forbidding Mourning, Donne creates an equality between husband and wife through his use of metaphysical conceit. The motif of circles also establishes the idea of a symmetry between the couple and an eternity; 'thy firmness makes my circle just' shows that Donne needs his wife to maintain balance and completion.

Coursework is due on Thursday. 

In the last lessons...
We have looked at the opening of Jane Eyre and the presentation of isolation/otherness, madness and race in the opening. The scene in the red room is particularly powerful (and also useful to look at as a Gothic text).
In the last lesson we looked at the scene where Bertha is revealed in the attic. (Chapter 26) Here, we also looked at the presentation of isolation/otherness, madness and race. 

It was this presentation of Bertha Mason that compelled Jean Rhys to write Wide Sargasso Sea. 

Make sure you have read WSS well by Monday at the very latest. It seems short, but is not easy to read.

Let me know if you have any problems/ questions.

Ms