Dear Y13
After looking at most of your essays now I have a few general points to make.
After looking at most of your essays now I have a few general points to make.
- Have a clear topic sentence. What is your paragraph about? Each paragraph should have an introductory sentence that says what your paragraph is about; this could also link to the question.
- You need to have extended analysis of quotations. I can't underestimate the importance of this. It's necessary now and it's necessary in the exam. Say as much as you can.
- Explore how your quote links to Marxism and any potential links to Them and Uz
- In your analysis, can you link to any context. Don't do this as a mini-biography of Harrison, but as an integrated response to your quotation.
I didn't start out with the intention of these being AO1, 2, 3 and 4, but that's how it happened...
Leave a comment if you have any questions.
Ms
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